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Hayley
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PostPosted: Sat Jul 03, 2004 1:14 am    Post subject: The Quiet One Reply with quote

No sooner had i kissed your brow,
You fell abreast and lay me down upon your bed
And said anything and everything robbed of sound.
The rise and fall of "loves" unsteady breath
Unsure, less intrigued as far as yet,
But fearing rest,
Did not protest,
Instead i pledged through my naivety.
Your inaudiable words on which i choked,
Let fall my tears and thought provoke you to
Hold me more and reassure me that,
I'd done nothing wrong.
All fingers and thumbs from one to six,
Rebuttoned the dress that terror fixed
And took my hand,
Such a man, was he
That stole my dignity.




Just a little bit of rubbish i wrote when i was 15.
Hayley xx
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PostPosted: Sat Jul 03, 2004 1:29 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

This is far from a bit of rubbish Hayley, it's very well written and i feel the emotions...((((hug))))

I'd very much like to see more of your poems if you have them.

Love 'n' Hugs, Michelle xxxx
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PostPosted: Sat Jul 03, 2004 11:01 am    Post subject: WOW! Reply with quote

Hi Hayley, that was a really thought provoking. A wonderful poem, well written and very expressive.

Keep writing ... it's great for purging your feelings and you obviously have a talent for it.

Love and pull free visions
Neo
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PostPosted: Sat Jul 03, 2004 3:31 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I think it's an amazing poem! It's brilliant Hayley.

xxx Ruth
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PostPosted: Sun Jul 04, 2004 9:24 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Embarassed Thank you for taking the time to read it. I didnt think anyone would bother. Its a bit disjointed but i guess that reflects my thoughts at the time when every new experience was overwhelming. I might write more if i find some time. Thankyou guys,

Love you all, Hayley xx
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 04, 2015 3:40 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I have revisited this awesome poem today, Hayley - I feel it intensely. You portrayed your feelings powerfully.

Communication can be a challenge and although you may have struggled to express yourself at the time, the poem itself is beautiful and full of energy.

Please post some more when you have time.

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